- Prologue 1 -

Comments posted by:

xLightsOutx, 14 Sep 2008 05:38 pm
- your lines are always so pretty and smooth ;_; <3
very nice page~

Cally-chan, 14 Sep 2008 05:58 pm
- Your line art is always so clean!!! *jealous*

Aw!!! Sucha cute little boy! <3

MyaKonekko, 14 Sep 2008 06:06 pm
- Uh oh...he'll get too curious and then ignore his grandma. I just know it. >>

*Suki*, 14 Sep 2008 06:21 pm
- ): Such a cute little boy. I LOVE HIS EYEBROWS O.O

Isu, 14 Sep 2008 06:35 pm
- You're going to be a bad boy and not listen to her aren't you =w= hahaha Your lines really are always clean *super duper jealous*

MegamanZDevil, 14 Sep 2008 06:38 pm
- lmao, mayuu~ i love the way u draw, man. n' the way u do backgrounds... god u own me so badly.

hiromi, 14 Sep 2008 06:44 pm
- *goes with him* ' w '

XHOLIS, 14 Sep 2008 10:09 pm
- WHAT A CUTE LITTLE BOY ;A;<3

kairi_kazumi, 15 Sep 2008 05:59 am
- awww... such a cute boy! :3
I love your artwork! so clean!

Natsuki, 15 Sep 2008 08:38 pm
- OMG! *steals grandmama's scarf* *u*

Critic (Guest), 16 Sep 2008 03:07 pm
Just a note... - Since the face and eyes are basically the cornerstone of any manga style, you should really try to make yours a little more...well, a little more normal.

I mean, the boy is cute, yes. But his nose seems to be pushed inward on his face. Is it sunken in? It just looks a little odd, and I know no one else will ever say so.

The style you're using is very unique, but you may be exaggerating it a bit too much. I really think your manga would be vastly improved by a little more attention to the composition of the faces of your characters.

janirotluvx, 16 Sep 2008 03:25 pm
- ty guys 0w0

critic- Naa, I'll rather stick with my style XD thank you tho 0u0

JambaJuice (Guest), 16 Sep 2008 10:36 pm
- @Critic - And make her draw like any other stock anime style? Some of us love it for the very reason it's so different and unique. I know I do. ^^ (Though I do understand your critique and you opinions are fine. owo)

Oh, and this looks absolutely lovely. I can't wait for more pages of this! <3

janirotluvx, 17 Sep 2008 12:30 am
- ahh ty JambaJuice-san *\;_____;/* <3 *works hard TAT

MegamanZDevil, 17 Sep 2008 07:19 am
- lol, i can't help but laugh that the critic is a guest.

Kotori K, 17 Sep 2008 11:47 am
- Your style reminds me of Princess Ai. = w =

I wish you'd update more. D:

Isu, 17 Sep 2008 11:58 am
- HER STYLE IS SEXY THE WAY IT IS X(

Azeher13, 17 Sep 2008 02:46 pm
I Like it - Well, simplely I want more ;) I love this sort of histories...

janirotluvx, 17 Sep 2008 07:11 pm
- ;_____; ty all! *hugs you all and goes to work hard on it* ;A:

Nikkeh - lol I'm assuming it's probobly someone I know ;u;

Katori-san - Realli? OuO

Issun - ;_____; *hugggg*

Azeher13-san - aww ;///; *goes to work hard* ;u;! the folk tale kinda thing? *u*
aww ;//3//;! *goes to update more ;u;!

hiromi, 17 Sep 2008 09:19 pm
- Critic: LOL IT HAS A NOSE AND 2 EYES AND A MOUTH AND WE KNOW THAT IT'S A FACE STFU.

...j/k. :D
But seriously, a style is a style. Nothing wrong to give out opinions though, I guess.

MegamanZDevil, 17 Sep 2008 09:49 pm
- @mayu: lol, well ;;; i dunno. XD i'm assuming it's just some random ass person....... giving critics when they completely suck (probably do).

janirotluvx, 17 Sep 2008 10:14 pm
- LMAO OUO Hiro & Nikkeh you guys are making me cry with laughter ;A;

Cally-chan, 17 Sep 2008 11:27 pm
- LOL that random critic person is too scared to log in. I hate it when people don't understand the meaning of "personal style"

Don't listen to them Janirot, your style is awesome! Don't draw like everybody else! <3

MyaKonekko, 18 Sep 2008 06:00 am
- Cally-chan: I know, right? XD "Too scared"

Mayu: Your style is the reason why I wanna make mine less generic.

janirotluvx, 18 Sep 2008 07:33 pm
- lol! ;_____;
ty Calleh and Miya ;///___///;

Natsuki, 19 Sep 2008 12:16 am
- OMG! ROFL @ GUEST/CRITIC!! x'DDD

NORMAL IS FOR BORING PPL, MANNNNNN )<
I like Mayu's style just the way it is!! :'D always so clean and pretty~ ;u;;;

janirotluvx, 19 Sep 2008 12:47 am
- lol Nachos TAT!
ty ;u;

Elion, 22 Sep 2008 04:16 pm
nice - Beautiful style. Don't change it. Post some new stuff.

anime1addict, 23 Sep 2008 10:23 am
- ohh he's gonna go, just cuz you said that .3.

janirotluvx, 27 Sep 2008 09:53 pm
- Aww ty Elion-san T__T